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konon… BAWANG MERAH DAN BAWANG PUTIH

Ini sebuah naskah drama kenangan. Dibuat waktu masih mengais ilmu di SMP Negeri Bogor. Mereka yang main di drama ini; Rhidamal Barkah, Agus, Febry, Yasin(saya sendiri hi…) , Dara Pusita Sari, Ade Sumiati, dan trussssssssssssssss saya lupa. Maaf banget temen2 yang tidak kesebut namanya (dah lama sekali sih..). Inilah naskah kenangan kita yang sudah tersimpan selama kurang lebih 4 tahun. Selamat membaca temen2 dan mengingat kembali kenangan kenangan dulu yang tersimpan di SMP.

-Bawang Merah dan Bawang Putih-

Download disini untuk  naskah lengkapnya

Kisah ini berawal dari sebuah desa kecil yang indah. Tetapi keindahannya, dan keasriannya, tidak bisa menutupi kesedihan hati seorang gadis kecil, yang malang. Ia begitu sedih, karena ibunya sedang sakit keras.” “Kini kita beralih kesebuah rumah yang bersebelahan dengan gadis kecil tadi.”

Si Ibu Bawang Merah : “Dasar anak tak tau diuntung.”

Bawang Merah : “uh, ngomel terus”. ”Kepalaku pusing mendengarnya”. Lebih  baik aku pergi saja”.

Si Ibu Bawang Merah : “ Hei mau kemana, dasar anak nakal”. Ayo pulang dan cepat  masuk!”Jangan membuat Ibu semakin marah yah”.

Bawang Merah : “ cuih!!!” (meludah)

Si Ibu Bawang Merah : “Apa! “Beraninya kau begitu sama Ibu yah?” sini kau?” (kejar-kejaran)” daasr anak durhaka, Ibu bilang jangan lari, kalau                                     kutangkap ku pukul kau!” (menarik baju Bawang Merah lalu                                  memukul pantatnya)

Bawang Merah : “Auw, ampun Bu… ampun!

Ibu Bawang Merah :” Sudah ayo masiuk”.

Lalu kita beralih kerumah gadis kecil yang malang. Ketika itu ayah sang gadis akan berangkat berdagang”.

Bawang Putih : (mencium tangn sang Ayah) ”Ayah, hati-hati ya yah”.

Ayah Bawang Putih :”Iyah, kamu juga hati-hati di rumah dan jaga Ibu mu dengan

baik”.

Bawang Putih :”Baik Yah”.

Bertambahlah kesedihan sang gadis malang itu , setelah ditinggal pergi berdagang oleh Ayahnya. Kini ia sendirian mengurus Ibunya.

………………lanjutannya 

Bawang Putih :” ”Ibu”.

Ibu Bawang Putih :”Anak ku, tak usah bersedih, disini masih ada Ibu”. ”Ibu bangga  punya anak sepertimu”. ”Dan Ibu punya sesuatu untuk mu. Coba kau ambil kotak itu.

Bawang Putih :”Baik Bu”. ”Ini kotaknya Bu”.

………………………..Bersambung

***THE END***

 

Download naskah lengkapnya yang sudah diedit rapih:

naskah Konon Bawang Merah dan Bawang Putih


  1. yuliadoank
    Juni 21, 2009 pukul 4:03 am

    Masih ingat juga cerita jadull
    Hebat..

  2. creativeyhee
    Juni 25, 2009 pukul 4:19 am

    wah narsis juga ya sam masa SMP

  3. irnahepzz
    Juni 25, 2009 pukul 4:26 am

    wih…. Kisahnya Haru bgtttttttttttttt………….!!!!

  4. Juni 30, 2009 pukul 7:36 am

    salam kenal ja brooooooooooooo
    maen juga yach ke blogQ……….

  5. Agustus 25, 2009 pukul 4:46 am

    thank ia tas bntUannya…

    aku jadi bisa ngerjain tugas buat naskah drama…

  6. September 11, 2009 pukul 12:08 pm

    thangk ya dramanay lumayan bisa jadi juara deh
    gara gara naska dramana ini
    sumpar ceriitanya bagus banget

    • September 30, 2009 pukul 8:29 am

      Terimakasih, sama-sama, kamu hebat juga bawain drama ini bisa jadi juara, selamat ya.

  7. Nanang
    Oktober 13, 2009 pukul 8:24 am

    oy….ad yang naskahnya dalam bahasa jawa ???

    • November 5, 2009 pukul 1:28 pm

      blum ada tuh… lw bsa bhasa jwa? translit sja. OK kan.

  8. lia
    Desember 14, 2009 pukul 5:47 am

    naskah drama bawang merah bawang putih bahasa jawa dunk…

    • Desember 16, 2009 pukul 2:25 pm

      Hemmph….
      bahasa Jawa?
      Saya gak bikin Ba.
      Terimakasih ya sudah mu mampir.

  9. Desember 15, 2009 pukul 12:21 pm

    haiiiiiiiiiii,saya menyontek naskah ini karena di suruh oleh guru saya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ga pa2 yawwwwwwwwwww thanks

  10. Desember 15, 2009 pukul 12:35 pm

    haiiiiiiiiiiii cugh aq n sudar da jadian looo oh ya jng lupa dateng k ultah q yawwwwwwwwww

    • Desember 15, 2009 pukul 12:37 pm

      hore akhirx kalian berdua bsa pacaran,q ga akan lpa ultah u koqqqqq

      • Desember 16, 2009 pukul 2:19 pm

        heiii heiii heeeey!
        Masalah nyontek naskah sih ga papa, niiatnya kan memang mau berbagi.
        Tapi masalah jadian…..
        pacaran……
        hahahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
        Kamu ko nge-gosip.

  11. Januari 6, 2010 pukul 12:05 pm

    hey . mvp ia ak curi ide km soalnya ak lagi bingnng bgt . thks bnyk ia . ^_^ .

    • Januari 11, 2010 pukul 1:20 pm

      slow aja. sudah ngaku “nyuri” juga udah bae. he..

  12. dwi
    Januari 20, 2010 pukul 3:24 pm

    klh blh tau sandiko tuh pa sih.. and ceritanya bagus banget tau kren deh

    • Januari 25, 2010 pukul 1:44 pm

      ceritanya memang bagus, kalau dimainkan dalam drama dan mainnya serius apalagi.
      sandiko = salam hormat kepada atasan.

  13. ayu
    Februari 16, 2010 pukul 1:44 pm

    lam knal za y . . . mkch brkat naskah ni . . q jd bs ngrjaen tgas.

    • Februari 19, 2010 pukul 7:12 am

      Sama-sama. Terima kasih juga sudah mampir.

  14. nia
    Februari 21, 2010 pukul 8:23 am

    kayanya ada yg salah deh

  15. jess
    April 2, 2010 pukul 9:51 am

    terima kasih telah berbagi..
    saya minta izin untuk menyadur ya..🙂

    terima kasih.

  16. ayint
    Agustus 11, 2010 pukul 2:57 am

    untung ada ni naskah ..
    cari dimana-mana kaga ketemu ..
    thnaks ya bro! udah lumayan bagus kok !🙂

    • Oktober 1, 2010 pukul 9:16 am

      sama-sama.
      Doain yah smoga blog ini bisa tambah kreative.
      ^_^`

  17. September 29, 2010 pukul 7:02 am

    bagaimana yah perasaan saya, sehabis membaca cerita ini saya merasa terharu ILIKE IT ……………………….

    • Oktober 1, 2010 pukul 9:09 am

      terimakasih sudah suka.
      Smoga blog ini bisa tambah kreative. ^_^`

  18. rinnnn
    Oktober 16, 2010 pukul 6:39 am

    weh, ini yg orisinal ya? dari cerita yg asli? klasik gt?
    hoho baru tau cerita aslinya kyk gini,
    eh,, bntar2, kata tmn q ada versi laen ny jg ya?
    yg si Bwng putih ktemu ssorang/sp gt, trus d suruh milih kotak kecil/kotak gede, itu gmn ceritanya? ….

    kalo ini yg orisinal, brarti naskah drama bawngmerah bwng putih yg tak buat ngaco bgt😄 hhahag

    uintung dapet blog ini, jadi bosa tau cerita asli nya ^^ hehe

    Tq ya🙂 tlng d jwb

    • November 1, 2010 pukul 8:30 am

      ia. bner banget.
      naskah ini di buat berdasarkn cerita asli.
      versi lain memang ada, contohnya: Si bawang merah dan bawang putih yang dikasih buah labu oleh seorang nenek, tapi critanya tentu ga smenarik yg aslinya.😉

      hi.. yg komen kesini aku add di FB. di confirm y🙂

  19. winda cii blackwhite
    Oktober 19, 2010 pukul 9:56 am

    ehm bolle juga..

  20. whiendha_mhedhiie chiie blacksweeth
    Oktober 19, 2010 pukul 10:02 am

    ehm kurang seru c,,,,
    tp gk papa,,,bolle juga..,!!!!!!
    q ambil yach…
    bolle gk?
    hehe
    trims om….!!!!!

    • November 1, 2010 pukul 8:10 am

      OM??? liat-liat dong🙂
      OK. sama-sama. smoga membantu.

  21. April 15, 2011 pukul 11:57 pm

    thnx..
    Berkat ada ini, jadi lancar acara dramanya..🙂

  22. melanie prassetyo
    November 10, 2011 pukul 1:18 pm

    yahh,, kog pke’ acra brsmbung sgala sichh!! >,<,,

    tapii asik ughaa,, haha ^o^

    • November 13, 2011 pukul 2:06 am

      Terimakasih. versi lengkapnya bisa kamu download🙂

  23. Januari 4, 2012 pukul 12:07 pm

    thanks 4 ever yupss…..

  24. teta
    Januari 10, 2012 pukul 7:20 am

    ceritanya ke potong….padahal bagus

  25. niia
    Januari 25, 2012 pukul 9:17 am

    thanks ya atas naskahnya…jadi bisa sedikit terbantu buat tugas…tpi ada yg versi lain gak?yg versi gak pake’ tnman emas?

  26. rezkya vero smith sinaga
    Januari 26, 2012 pukul 12:02 pm

    maaaakkkaasiihhh banyakkk yooo,,,berkat ada ni naskah jadi kagak ribet lagii dehhh…

  27. bella jeniska
    April 2, 2012 pukul 3:44 pm

    hidup Q bagaikan nasib bawang putih yang malangggg…..

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